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Conclusion: Restate thesis statement & wrap up essayWhat is a Thesis Statement?

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19/01/2018 · How to Restate a Thesis

I am interested about the question from Kamlinder:
“Discussion Essay statement:–
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.”
I believe the first thing we should do to answer this by paraphrasing the question. Yet I wonder, since It is a quite long sentence and the question divide into 2 main part, do we have to combine those two into 1 paraphrase sentence OR it’s ok to make 2 sentence before we arrived to our opinion?

That’s right -restate it again in the body paragraph with the side you agree with.

Most discussion essays ask you to discuss both sides and give your opinion. This dictates your introduction. You should paraphrase the two sides that IELTS have given as your background statement and then write your opinion as your thesis statement.

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You must put your opinion in the introduction. Then you can add it to a body paragraph of the side you agree with or you have put it in a third body paragraph to explain it more fully. Both ways are fine. Don’t forget to re-state it in the conclusion.

Hi Liz,
I was wondering what should be the thesis statement of a discussion essay which doesn’t require opinion? Should it be like : in this essay both advantages and disadvantages of … Will be discussed? Or should one main advantage and disadvantage be discribed like this: for example : a public transport system has the main advantage of reducing traffic congestion in cities but it also has some disadvantages for example everyone is forced to pay for it but not everyone gets access to it.

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Hi Liz. I have a question if you have time. In discussion essay if I do not agree with the statement how can I write it? For exampla, continuous coverage of sport discourages the young from taking part in any sport. i mean thesis and body paragraph. I wrote introduction. Please help me. I have a month left to the exam. Thank you very much

Hello Liz, in discussion essay model, should we give our opinion in the conclusion or in the thesis statement. I have a test on 29th of October. It is requested to please answer before it

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    You mean that we have to write the both opinion of statement in introduction part . 😊

  • Thesis Statement Creator: - McGarvey Online

    Please check it one more time and do write your model introduction and thesis statement for this discussion question.

  • Creating Thesis Statement & Outline - Library - Butte …

    A thesis statement is usually a sentence that states your argument to the reader.

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H Liz,
Firstly, I want to appreciate your effort to help us. My question is that whether or not it is okay to state my own opinion in my conclusion in ”discuss both sides essays” after discussing the ideas given in the statement rather than in the introduction.

How do you restate a thesis statement

Good afternoon Liz! Thank you very much for all your help!
In a discussion essay, when the prompt asks for our opinion and our opinion stands solely with one of the two aspects. Should it be advisable to state our opinion only in the introduction, or we should restate it in the paragraph where we elaborate on the aspect that we stand for, using again one of the phrases that you taught us (in my opinion, I think, I believe)?

What does restate thesis statement mean - …

In this essay I agree with this statement that conventional mode of examinations are out dated.
So what should I include..?
The advantages of modern examination technology or disadvantages of conventional examination?

What does restate thesis statement mean

Hi Liz,
Your tutorials are really good. I want to thank you creating such a nice and informative site for IELTS.
Liz, in many of the writing essay questions we see a statement saying “include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience” . But in most of the band8/band9 answers i never see real life example. kindly Explain what do we have to do when “relevant examples from knowledge ” have been asked for

simply restate your thesis statement, ..

You would write “People have different opinions about what punishment children should receive for committing crimes. While some people think children should receive adult punishment, others feel it is too harsh.” My background statement introduces the topic and my thesis introduces the two sides. At no time should you turn your discussion essay into an advantage disadvantage essay. And you should never learn a formulaic sentence to memorise and write in your test.
All the best

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Regarding the first phrase to avoid, I need to know whether the following format is correct. I started my essay with a general statement and wrote that some people believe that ….and stated the first opinion and wrote that others feel that … and mentioned the second opinion and then for the thesis statement I wrote” in this essay I will discuss both opinions and give mine at the conclusion”. Is my thesis statement correct?

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